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What do you think of this?
It's great, it's really the best Moc you've made.
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It's great, but I've seen better from you.
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It's not bad.
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It's not good.
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PostSubject: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Thu Nov 03, 2011 11:41 pm




This is my 3rd version of the Venator, my biggest and best MOC so far, which I made back in May. It took about 6 days to build, and I'm very proud of how it turned out. It's much more sturdy than my last one. And please don't bug me to cover the studs more, I did my best with the amount of tiles I had.



The back with engines.

The side. Sorry if it's a bit holed.

The other side.

The front.

The top.

Close up on the greebles.

More greebles.

The bridge. I love how it turned out.

The turrets.

The republic emblem. It took a while to build.

Another pic of the bridge. And now to my classic joke: can you see the clones in the bridge?!

The greebles on the other side.

And more greebles.

The back with the engines. I don't know why, even though I have placed the engines like they are supposed to, I still think that there's something wrong with them I can't put a finger on.

The stand.

Just an another pic of it.


Well, I hope you liked my biggest and best moc.
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:38 am

Looks great!
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Sun Nov 06, 2011 6:28 pm

The engines are a bit too long maybe? Also the greebling could be pushed in a bit more, but that's it.

Very good job overall.
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Mon Nov 07, 2011 4:16 am

Really like the greeblees, Nice build!
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Mon Nov 07, 2011 7:02 am

Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Mon Nov 07, 2011 7:11 am

Wangster wrote:
Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
Is there any specific part that you think he could've done better on? For your feedback to be constructive, you have to be more specific.
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:44 pm

Wangster wrote:
Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
What could be improved?
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Tue Nov 08, 2011 3:34 am

E.K.Ocreations wrote:
Wangster wrote:
Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
What could be improved?
Well, I guess that the ship could be a little wider so it will be in proportion. Also, work on the Red double-arc yellow circle logo. I know that you're using standard bricks and not stickers, but try doing it SNOT. That'll look pretty interesting. Overall, pretty sweet!!
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PostSubject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3   Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:12 am

E.K.Ocreations wrote:
Wangster wrote:
Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
What could be improved?
Well, I guess that the ship could be a little wider so it will be in proportion. Also, work on the Red double-arc yellow circle logo. I know that you're using standard bricks and not stickers, but try doing it SNOT. That'll look pretty interesting. Overall, pretty sweet!!
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